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Ed the Editor's avatar

What fool throws a spear at a giant dragon 😂.

I think it’s cozy. A brush with danger, a little sad. But the dragon and the child are heartwarming and make up for it.

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I didn't plan on reading this today, but when a friend says it's good, you trust them. I unequivocally agree.

There was just enough of your prose visible that I could appreciate your brushstrokes. Metaphors used sparingly; you trusted readers to fill in the gaps. The story telling is stellar. Little things like Aria's bone comb in her hair, her reaching for her wooden bird...

Then the dialogue itself was excellent. Used sparingly, enough to layer on tension and build character scaffolding, again, to let readers fill in the gaps.

I have no qualms with this story qualifying for this prompt contest, not that it's my call or anything. But it's a damn good story in its own right.

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